hurtling lovers
in these deep dark hours
hasty rain
on thirsty flowers
desperate wishes
for some stolen nights
no one knows what is wrong
or what is right
add up your sorrows
and fly them like some flags
feel the wind as
it blows them ragged
it’s more than water
in a bruised angel’s eyes
dashed on the rocks
of a lover’s lies
these fragile secrets
oh they burn us if untold
which one to wager
and which one to fold
add up your sorrows
and dry them in your eyes
memorize the flowers
as they curl up and die
we brandish our bruises
like immaculate fools
why do we cherish
the things that we lose?
why do we cherish
the things that we bruise?
why can't we cherish
the things that are true?
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ReplyDeleteWHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE
ReplyDeleteMy opinion about this poem is love can make sweet moment for everyone. But, sometimes we can also feel sad. You must throw up your sorrow, be brave to say that you're in love with someone. Don't lie yourself, it's to be love or not!
This poem is about the suffering of love. Love can be beautiful, but it can also be painful when it ends. Everything becomes stifling when our love ends. It is really hard to forget the love that has been lost. We even often remember the love that has past without seeing any realities that may be much better.
ReplyDeleteI think the title of this poem is "HEART BALLADS"
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ReplyDeleteThe Irreplaceable Love
ReplyDeleteActually, at first, I didn't really get the meaning of this poem but after having a discussion with my friend, I can conclude that this poem tells us a story about a girl (it can also be a boy) who was left by her love. She remembers and misses all of wonderful moments when they were together. Though, in fact, she realizes that she actually doesn't need to love someone who even never loves her but for her, he is irreplaceable.
In my humble opinion, this poem tells a story of two lovers who are madly in love with one another. The intensity of their passion clouded their judgment. And so, they let their desires dance freely around them.
ReplyDeleteWhen their relationship ended in ruins, the poem shares a question with us. Are we capable to accept the past as it was and continue on? Learn from the mistakes we made in the past to ensure our careful steps for the future. Personally, some moments in the past are not simple to come to terms with.
Sometimes facts are hard to believe and it is hurtful to know the truth. Those kind of things are hard to be forgotten or ignored. Truths and lies are both different things in life and we have to choose which one to go with. There are also consequences if we choose to go with lies, because if we could cover it up then it is okay, but if not then we are doomed.
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This poem, in my opinion tells about 2 lovers who were madly in love but based on the sentence 'it’s more than water, in a bruised angel’s eyes' it may be told from the woman's point of view. Eventually she lost her faith on her lover because he told lots of lies and then they broke up. Unfortunately she still can't move on and accept the fact that things are over between them and she still can't let him go.
ReplyDeleteThe title suited for this poem I think is 'Everything We had'
Reaching You
ReplyDeletethe poem, for me, is about a lover's lies and efforts to get someone. they struggle to get the special someone and hurted so many times. but he/she keep trying but the final result doesn't seem to be very well, nothing is perfect anyway, but the love they have is always on forever for their 'love of their lives'
i hate poems.
"Killing me Softly"
ReplyDeleteThis tragic poem tells me that,
An untrue story can destroy hope
A lie makes our life out of whack
Nothing is more painful than being lied by someone
A love player can't accept the reality,a bitter defeat in her life
Losing a sweetheart,who has tore out on his heart
Therefor,we may not lose by situation. Yet we must be able to overcome the fact,because life is still going on.
I think this poem tells us
ReplyDeletethat love is not always lovely
love can be really suck
it's like a heroin
first time you taste it
you will get a very passionate feelings
and somehow, you'll be addicted
but if you get rid of it
you will suffer a very hurtful pain
so don't be too much in love
before it blow you up
JUST SO SO
This poem tell me about a fake hope about love, about someone who was waiting for her love but finally he / she knows that everything is useless and feels sorrow because of that. He / she became fragile and wondering why people can't cherish about others people feeling
ReplyDeletethe best title for this poem is "Melody of Sorrows"
"What's left of me"
ReplyDeleteThis poem is a story about love. When people falling in love, when people lost their love, when people lied by love. This person is already now that someone he love isn't the right person to him but he hard to move on. He can't decline that he still love her
this poem tell us about the reality of life, that life is never easy and goes like we always want.Sometimes everything seems good for us, but then it's just temporary because live is never flat.
ReplyDeleteThe suitable name for this poem is "It's My Life"
in my opinion, the meaning of this poem is that , not all ending must end perfect, but that doesn't mean we can't cherish what we already had. Endings are sometimes sad but we can't go on through our life regretting the past. What's done is done. If we have a bitter memory about someone or something we must let it go. We can't expect all things to go according to plan.
ReplyDeletea name for this poem "letting go"
The poem tells us about the condition of a romantic couple.They are looking for the truth between them. But he/she was not able to express his/her feelings and just kept his/her love so that tormented them. According to the poem we should express the truth to those we love so we established in love with the truth.
ReplyDeleteI think the best title for that poem is " The Truth of Love. "
mmmmmm....
ReplyDeletethe title is "Live in Love"
this poem tell us that you should be able to choose which way to go or leave. It tell us about what should we do in making decision. is it really good to you or you just want it that way. Because sometimes, things that we think good for us is not really what we need. aND sometimes, love, make your decision wrong because you just consider about something that could make "them" happy but not for you. And that's why you should think what you really need.
for this poem , no matter how hard we try to love someone it will have no perfect result. The judgment is based on our effort. All we can do is try and that’s why we live for. We have to prepare for the worst scenario if we are going to get broken heart. Perhaps she is not our mate, because God only know who will be suitable for us. The more obstacle we get in our way the more stronger we become.
ReplyDeleteLonely lover:
ReplyDeleteThis poem tells about a man who suffered from bad experience of loving somebody. He felt so sad and hurt. He had lived alone without any true love beside him. But he realized this situation is better for him for some reason and he believed that God will give true love for him.
"Love is Hard"
ReplyDeleteI think this poem tell us that love can be hard. Love can hit your soul, cut deep down your heart and even easily deny the reality. If you love somebody so much you won't care everything around and barely breathe when you’re with them. You'll feel like sinking and flying when you're deeply in love. However, when we lose someone we love, it feels like the world is against us. We can't easily ignore our past then heal our frazzle heart. Love is hard and can make us delusional that's why the person in this poem is trying hard to move on and forget the thing that she used to cherish.
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ReplyDeleteEndless Love
ReplyDeleteIt's about a man who is neglected by his lovely girl. But this man still keeps his feeling, his love to this girl. He is hurt. But his love to this girl is more than the hurt feeling that he feels.
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ReplyDeletean effort that never stop
ReplyDeletei believe this poem is talking about someone
that trying hard to achieve something but he failed to reach that. sometimes he feel that this not his destiny to get what he want and almost stop trying for his goal but one day he believe that his tears, struggles. sweats and every efforts that he made should be pay and he try again and again to reach his goal !!
in my point of view this not only a poem that make by lover but something more than that !
This is a poem about lovers that have a choice between sacrificing other in order to save themselves or sacrificing themselves in order to save other. In the poem, they decided to save themselves. As time goes on, the sacrifice become more painful and they decided to end it by seeing the reality.
ReplyDeleteThe title of this poem is 'Illuminated Lovers'